Wednesday, December 1, 2021

Feedback on Coursework

 

·       Make Imy Moon bigger + and shorten cover lines , change one to someone else, align cover line

·       Change ‘10 fashion trends’ to true life

 

·       Move call to action to editor’s note – make it more obvious

·       More contents - Look at voice, Vous

·       Swap editors note w/ Featuring on Imy

 

·       Add to website, audio on video

·       Add text introducing main features of the mag – what is it about

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